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Cher Patricia...
Cher Patty? Pam...ela? Pauline...


Francis crumbled up the letter again and sighed. What had been her name again? He gave up and simply wrote:

Ma belle fleur,
Last night was absolutely beautiful.
Merci. Hope we can do this again sometime,

sincerement avec tout mon coeur,

Francis


It was perfect, he thought. He bent the sheet of paper and a placed it on the bedside table. He left the room just as the young lady in bed began to stir. As he properly dressed himself in her apartment elevator, he was uncomfortably reminded that he would not have time for breakfast before getting to work. What a shame. Working on an empty stomach was absolutely dreadful. He would always tell Arthur that and yet he would always ignore him...

By the time he got outside into the brisk air of Fall, he was really wishing he had taken his car. He hurried to the nearest subway entrance, paid the fair and got on a train. Yawning, he found a seat between some grisly fellow and a teenage. The man was reading from one of those electronic books Francis had always been curious about but never got around to getting. Perhaps he could get Antonio to find one for him.
The intercom announced his stop so the tall blond stood and moved to the door. When the train came to a stop, he wavered slightly from the force before stepping out when the doors opened. Many others followed out after him and he was almost too caught up in the rush to notice the man sleeping on a bench.He must've been waiting for someone or else he probably should've woken for the train. What caught Francis' eye was determining whether he really was looking at a man since he had such ambiguous features. Very cute and Francis was reminded of a younger self. Very strange, he thought, but he ignored it for now. After a few seconds of disturbing the flow of people, Francis continued on his way, concentrating on not being late for work.
In fact, he got to the hospital early, early enough that Arthur was just preparing for his shift as receptionist and frowned seeing Francis stride in.
Arthur sighed grumbling. "Why are you early? I thought I'd get at least fifteen minutes of peace this morning..."
"You're happy to see me," Francis said leaning on the desk. "You've been thinking about me all night, n'est ce pas?"
Arthur snickered. "You're seriously full of yourself."
"You fantasized about me all night," Francis continued. "All night, 'Oh how I wish Dr. Bonnefoy was here...' and 'If only Dr. Bonnefoy would relieve me'..."
"You're disgusting, Francis."
"Come now, that's not what you're supposed to call me," Francis pouted. "Say it... 'Doctor...'"
"I refuse to be a part of your repulsive fetishes," Arthur said concentrating on signing into the computer. "Now get your diseased hands off my desk before I order you a vasectomy."
Francis leaned back and placed his hands in his pockets. "I'm going to get my scrubs. I'll be right back."
"Don't come back."
Francis went to get dressed.
The rest of the day was pretty bland. He had lunch with Arthur as always which was fun. The only patients Francis had that day were only really there because WebMD which told them their cold symptoms were terminal. It was kind of insulting to deal with them but at least they were careful. By the time he was done, he was rather bored and did some paperwork before heading out. He passed by the front desk to blow a kiss to Arthur before leaving.
Stepping outside again, he was really contemplating calling his roommate to pick him up but it was pointless. The rush hour traffic would be terrible and he really only lived a few subway stops away so he went underground. Paying his fair, he stepped out to the subway platform. There were so many others were all lining the subterranean walls like plaque that he might not have noticed the young man still on the bench.
He's still there? Curiously, Francis walked over to take a look. The man--more like boy--was still asleep and in the exact same place, his back against a suitcase. He wondered why the staff or personnel of the system hadn't noticed or moved him. It was highly unlikely someone would wait so long for someone else. This really disturbed Francis.
So he went up and poked him.
He didn't move so he poked him again. "Hey, wake up."
Suddenly the boy jolted from his sleep, his hands flying from his hood pockets to press against his heart. He had really scared him. "Wh-What are you doing?!"
"Désolé," Francis said. "But I couldn't help noticing that you've been here all day."
"You've been watching me?" he asked furrowing his eyebrows.
"N-No! Well, not exactly..." Francis scratched his head. "Shouldn't you go home?"
"Can't..." The boy looked at him with sunken and tired eyes and Francis realized he must have been here much longer than he knew. He didn't smell all that good either.
Francis sighed. "Do you need a place to stay?"
"No," he said quickly. "I'm fine." Then he used one unwashed hand to brush his lengthy hair out of his face and Francis noticed the bruises on his wrist. In fact, there were bruises on his neck too, revealed by the movement of his hair.
"Eh, you're hurt!" Francis picked up his hand to look at the bruises but the other tore it from his grip.
"Don't touch me!"
"But those bruises..." Francis became antsy. "I'm a doctor. I can help you. There's a hospital only seconds from this station..."
"No!" The boy seemed terrified. "No hospital! I'm fine! Go away!"
"Please let me help you," Francis insisted. "I can't leave you here like this!" He tried to see the bruises again but instead was pushed away again.
The boy began to cry; quietly though, not enough to draw attention. He shook terribly and he looked like he hadn't eaten in days.
"Please don't cry," Francis said crouching down in front of him. "I won't touch you but could you at least let me buy you something to eat? Perhaps just from the Gateway?"
The boy just nodded, sniffling and sobbing into the arms of his sweater.
"Come pick something," Francis said. "I don't know what you like."
He nodded again and stood, although seemingly unsteady. Francis presumed he hadn't walked all day. The boy took a few steps towards the snack stand before leaning against the wall.
"Huh?" Francis got there in time just before his acquaintance fell to the ground. "Mon cher!"
He had completely passed out. Francis tried everything to get him to wake up but nothing worked. Honestly, Francis practically forgot he was even a doctor and didn't know what to do. He knew he should get him to the hospital but the boy had been so against it before that a part of him thought to oblige to his wishes. And for some insane reason, he did.
Carrying him out of the subway, Francis called Antonio.
"Hola!" Came the greeting.
"Antonio? You have my keys, right?"
"Francis? Si! I do."
"Pick me up! Immediately!"
"Hey, is something wrong?"
"Yes, just pick me up!"
Surprisingly, two minutes later, the car pulled up to the side of the curb. Antonio rolled down the window. "Huh? Who's that?"
"I have no idea," Francis said as he opened the back doors and put the boy inside. He placed his suitcase beside him and then got into the passenger seat.
Antonio looked back. "He's so skinny and dirty! Did you pick up a hobo?"
"No, just get us home," Francis insisted. As Antonio pulled the car off the curb, Francis sighed. "He needs a place to stay and some food."
"Clearly!"
"I seriously should have just taken him to the hospital..." Francis pouted. Then he looked at Antonio. "Why were you so close when I called?"
"Eh heh..." The tan driver scratched his head. "I wanted to go shopping so..."
"You don't have money," Francis said.
Antonio took Francis' credit card out of his own pocket. The blond frowned taking it back.
"How unclassy..."
"You're the one stealing a hobo..."
"He's not a hobo. Just take us home."

WARNING: This fanfic includes the topics of mpreg, rape, abortion, homosexuality, crossdressing, homophobia, and other possibly controversial stuff. The opinions expressed by the characters do not reflect the opinion of the author. Read at your own discretion and don't be a douche if you disapprove.



First chapter!~ Francis perspective as he is a terrible doctor, not taking Matt to the hospital.

Although this is the first chapter, THERE IS A PROLOGUE. For those who want more information, READ IT.


Prologue
Part 2

All Hetalia characters (C) Hetalia (c) Hidekaz Himaruya

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:iconilovecanadainhetalia:
ilovecanadainhetalia Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
um....C-Can I put the chapters of this into a story on wattpad? I'll still credit you and direct them to this account, but some people might want to read it while away from the internet so......may I?
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
I'm sorry to say this, but I'd rather you don't. I understand what you're trying to do and I really appreciate you asking but I've never been comfortable with people resubmitting my work elsewhere online.
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ilovecanadainhetalia Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
 it's fine. I don't mind the rejection. It is your work and I appreciate that you don't want anyone to not give you credit. it's completely ok.
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
I'm glad you understand.
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ilovecanadainhetalia Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
It's fine. It's still a very good story. Why not make you own wattpad account and put it on there? I would love to read it a lot more often.
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
I'll think about it. I get lost when I have too many accounts on different things.
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Jazzy-Jazzy-Woo-Woo Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"You're the one stealing a hobo..."
"He's not a hobo. Just take us home."

Oh my god I can't breath from laughing too much XD

I'm usually not into these types of fanfics but DAMN you got me good!!
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emo9otaku Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014   General Artist
I can tell this is gonna be good~ 
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:iconlupoartistico:
Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Did you read the prologue?~
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emo9otaku Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014   General Artist
Yep I sure did XD it's really good! 
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
THank you~
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Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Uh....how do you steal a hobo exactly?
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emo9otaku Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014   General Artist
want me to teach you? 
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Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah.... ok I guess thanks!!!!
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lilkougar598 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's hilarious! Stealing a hobo.
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Glad you think so~
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I-am-the-Wolf Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really loved the bit about all those patients being there because of webMD. I have fun screwing with the iphone app and seeing how easy it is to make it say I'm gonna die.

I also like your take on Antonio so far. Still cheery, but in a different way and not totally against doing unmoral things, like taking his friends credit card. It's fitting for the story, to say the least. Francis was just perfect.
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist

I thought it was clever~ WebMD is pretty stupid sometimes.

I try to make the characters slightly different because it's an AU so Antonio's a little thief sometimes and Francis... Well he's smarter ish.

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ShowKnightPrincess Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this was hilarious! lol "Stealing a hobo". this is great!
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
THanks!~
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I cant help but laugh at the stealing a hobo part ghis is a good part
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks!~ But it's the truth. His stealing a hobo.
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Welcome

But its really Matt right?

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:iconlupoartistico:
Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Yes, it's Matt.
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gotta know what happens next
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:iconlupoartistico:
Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
I'll try to put it up today
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ill read it when its up
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
k
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Mona-the-yaoi-freak Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhetaliafranceplz: :iconsaysplz: Spain, I need an eReader stat!

:iconhappyspainplz: :iconsaysplz: Ok!

And oh my god the "hobo" and Spain took France's credit card. This story is making me laugh and cry all at once. Amazing job so far. 
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Lol eReader... I didn't realize anyone would notice that...
I love these guys so much.
and thank you~
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Mona-the-yaoi-freak Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem and I love them, too. :)
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LigerMuffins Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pfft when I read the warning after reading the story, I saw the word rape and immediately dreaded the thought that they were going to rape the boy. X(

Sorry, I love the story so far. C: XD
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Do you want me to cheet you up about it? The rape ended in the prologue. No more rape.
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hinatahyuuga1133 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i could not help but lauhg at the last lines XD
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks~
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TonyKuma Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Why do I have a feeling Gilbert will appear very soon in the loudest way possible, most likely scaring poor Mattie half to death?
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Hm... I can't say...
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Marigold451 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mattie, Francis and Antonio will help you get your health back. You'll be back to (almost) normal in no time! And Gil will help you, too! I just don't know how yet! (Can't wait to read the next chapter!)
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Almost is a keyword here... And Gil will  be in the next chapter I think so he can help~
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Marigold451 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconfuckyeahamericaplz: Cool! ^^
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dragonmastrcrashrokz Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013   Artist
Lol, stealing a hobo... xD
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
I just really felt like that's what Tonio would say~
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dragonmastrcrashrokz Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013   Artist
lol, it is. xD good call. XD
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanx~
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ElviraTepes Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
loves. More plz
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Nevaaah!!! joking
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ElviraTepes Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:) 
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pewdiefanbro Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Likes :D
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Lupoartistico Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
gut
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pewdiefanbro Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Some of our convo is on Two Girls and A boy
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